Saturday, August 28, 2010

Phases of a Woman's Life


As a bud she leaps out of the womb
To behold her first sunlight.
Encased with love and ready to delight-
The world with her tranquility.
She germinates with fragility & exquisitely
And blooms with redolent fragrance.
Nestled & rejoiced, reflects her vigilance;
Clandestinely she begets her inflammation
In her transformation from worm to butterfly,
Diluting her nonchalance with ameliorating pulchritude.
To pollinate she flies, aroma too encompassed
To dec her beehive with honey.
As a Queen Bee she infuses reverence
From her family with weapon of patience.
To cascade her love and sustain her maneuver of goodness,
Another angel debuts the Earth
From her womb to get her first sunshine!

7 comments:

  1. awesome concept...

    uve made her fly :)

    Cheers
    CRD

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  2. When does a woman get a chance to be herself?

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  3. :D Everything that exists can be compared to other beautiful or ugly things too. It doesnt mean that their originality is confiscated when they are compared. LOL

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  4. Extremely wonderful choice of words!! Strated off really well, floundered in between (How cud a child display vigilance, rather a child exudes innocence), the ending is well conceived but leaves u asking for more.

    A nice and laudable effort.

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  5. Ok, lemme just summarize
    The poem portrays the following stages of women
    Stage 1:Birth
    Stage 2:Childhood
    Stage 3:Puberty and vigilance is just what she exhibits or reacts towards her new change n its sufferance.
    Stage 4: Marriage
    Stage 5: Parenthood
    @Navneet
    Hope I've cleared the doubt :)

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